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The Black Air by Jennifer Lane: Review

Having relocated to the countryside after the tragic death of her mother, sixteen-year-old Cate Aspey has found it difficult to fit in, particularly since the village she resides in, Long Byrne, has its own traumatic history.

Four hundred years ago, two young women were burned at the stake for witchcraft, something the insular locality hasn’t processed particularly well. The inhabitants are obsessed with the tale to this day. The upcoming anniversary leads to Cate, a talented writer, being asked to put together a play about the two witches. With her mental health already suffering, deep involvement in the dark history of Long Byrne affects her, driving wedges between friends, family and another newcomer to the village, a direct descendant of one of the witches.

The Black Air is at its best when dealing with Cate’s trauma and eating disorder. Her characterisation is excellent. The author has put a lot of work into providing detailed descriptions of the geography and environment of Long Byrne, but we lack insight as to why the story of the witches still holds such sway over it after four centuries. The UK is not short of horrific history and why the village still bears scars from this incident needs more explanation. In light of this, the finale, with its overt supernatural occurrence included, feels unearned.

Paddy Lennon

The Black Air
Jennifer Lane
Uclan Publishing, 2023
Paperback, £8.99
ISBN 9781915235312

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Storm of Ash

Storm of Ash
Michelle Kenney
HQ Digital, June 2020
Paperback, 384 pages, £8.99
ISBN 9780008331108 

Final parts of an existing trilogy are tough. Existing plot threads need to be tidied up, the cast given their due, and fan expectations need to be addressed. In the case of Michelle Kenney wrapping up her well received series of fantasy YA novels there is some good news. For the most part, Storm of Ash is successful. Characters from previous books in the series return (some unexpectedly). Talia, the protagonist, takes some bold decisions that, although they may not always pay off, are interesting ones. She is a strong character with a fierce love for her family and friends. In those respects, it’s a satisfactory conclusion.

There are some moments, however, where it seems the story is progressing in a certain direction only because it is how these stories are expected to develop. This makes the second half of the book seem disjointed.

Kenney is a talented writer: the dialogue, scene setting, character work and action are all of a high standard. The concept of the Pantheon, a futuristic dictatorship inspired by the Roman Empire, is an interesting concept. More information on its rise, technology and internal workings would have been welcome.

Storm of Ash is an effective, albeit imperfect, series finale. 

Paddy Lennon